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My CoLoUrFuL dEaTh

September 17, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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the only thing you have to do in life is die<br /> music makes everything better

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I've fallen off the beaten Path,
Traveled through the Woods,
With my black Sash,
I fled through the Forest,
In my best white Dress.

I ran through the Green,
My Silver shoes gleamed,
I jumped off the dirt,
In my favorite Gray shirt.

I danced throughthe Leaves,
My pink Ribbons falling off my sleeves,
I hopped off the Road,
Into the Woods I strode.

I sprinted into the Sea,
Dying Automaticly.

© Chyla P., El Dorado, KS

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in Class,
I wrote poem because "I've fallen off the beaten path" came to my mind it InSpireD me
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PickledTacos said...
on Jul. 10 2016 at 10:41 pm
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I love the ending
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 1:24 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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I&#039;ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. <br /> - Maya Angelou <br /> When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn&rsquo;t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out<br /> The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay<br /> If love produced a blossom/I&rsquo;d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I&rsquo;d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven<br /> And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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The last line: Epic.. This poem appear simply written but when one looks into the meaning of each word each syllable each letter everything becomes so clear, the message is deep.
colourfuldeather said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:46 pm
thank you sooooo much
thestoryofme163 SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 1:43 pm
thestoryofme163 SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
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this reminds me of some of the stuff we've been talking about in my english class about the loss of innocence. cool :)
\\^/RageCage12\\^/ GOLD said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:11 pm
\\^/RageCage12\\^/ GOLD, La Porte, Indiana
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Very nice

I like how well it flows and the way the rhythm follows evenly.

Very good work
LittleAngel*12 SILVER said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:26 pm
LittleAngel*12 SILVER, New Paris, Indiana
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nice job, like this a lot

I think it describes a lot of us....
brenthewren GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:35 am
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!