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So oft’ I close my eyes MAG

December 3, 2022
By EmilyTheKiwi PLATINUM, Flemington, New Jersey
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EmilyTheKiwi PLATINUM, Flemington, New Jersey
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“Picture a wave. In the ocean. You can see it, measure it, its height, the way the sunlight refracts when it passes through. And it's there. And you can see it, you know what it is. It's a wave.

And then it crashes in the shore and it's gone. But the water is still there. The wave was just a different way for the water to be, for a little while. You know it's one conception of death for Buddhists: the wave returns to the ocean, where it came from and where it's supposed to be."
-The Good Place

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So oft’ I close my eyes and you are there,
Just like the many times within my dreams.
That you may not be near is hardly fair,
This life is much more lonely than it seems.
But with you or without I see it clear,
For once my fragile heart may slow its pace.
I think much better now that you are here,
And smile each time I see your lovely face.
The details never cease to leave my mind,
A glance or kind remark and I feel shy.
If you could see my thoughts I’m sure you’d find,
I think of you just as the clouds do sky.
My future once a known feels so unsure.
But I should hope to see you evermore.

Photo by David Ballew on Unsplash

The author's comments:

I have a deep admiration for sonnets. They are very structured, which can make it hard to keep a steady meter and structured rhyme scheme. I was inspired by Shakespeare’s sonnets while writing this. I’ve memorized a few of his sonnets myself.

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