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November 6, 2018
By Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both. <br /> - Native American proverb<br /> <br /> Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br /> - Dylan Thomas<br /> <br /> What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.<br /> - Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

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I battled demons before I met you

There are things that I’ve been through

Thing that only you know

From yesterday yet long-ago

You came along and lit up my world

And stole the heart of a broken girl

You are the light at the end of the tunnel

I’ve never felt so close to your golden lull

But is this another broken road?

Am I destined to be alone?

I don’t know anything anymore

Even though you try to restore

I will always be sore

From this darkness that I can’t ignore

© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO

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Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2019 at 11:38 am
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
62 articles 87 photos 200 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both. <br /> - Native American proverb<br /> <br /> Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br /> - Dylan Thomas<br /> <br /> What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.<br /> - Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

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Thank you, mysterious person that I don't know! Hehe...
Moony-Parker SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2019 at 8:18 pm
Moony-Parker SILVER, Hogwarts, Other
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.”<br /> ~Anais<br /> <br /> “It is the quality of one’s convictions, not the amount of followers that determines success.” ~Remus Lupin<br /> <br /> “We both have a bit of light and dark in us. What we act on defines who we are.” ~Sirius Black<br /> <br /> “Wingardium Leviosa.”

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So beautiful! Bravo, bravo!!
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 29 2018 at 6:52 pm
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
62 articles 87 photos 200 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both. <br /> - Native American proverb<br /> <br /> Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br /> - Dylan Thomas<br /> <br /> What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.<br /> - Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

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@Hiroshima Thanks for taking the time to read this!
Hiroshima SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2018 at 11:26 am
Hiroshima SILVER, Raeford, North Carolina
7 articles 3 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Perseverance is not one long race, but many short races one after the other<br /> -Walter Elliott

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hhhhhmmmmmmmm- i like it, its depressing
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 20 2018 at 1:23 pm
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
62 articles 87 photos 200 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both. <br /> - Native American proverb<br /> <br /> Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br /> - Dylan Thomas<br /> <br /> What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.<br /> - Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

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@zulal88 Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
lula-masterofchange88-wizardofozgur BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2018 at 12:18 am
lula-masterofchange88-wizardofozgur BRONZE, Camp Half - Blood, Other
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Favorite Quote:
if you're going to do something, do it right

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Oh wow this is awesome I was singing it can you write another part of this in the exact same way with the same rhythm? my tune is probably not the same as yours but it all fits perfectly i didn't even physically hear this yet it will be stuck in my head all day tomorrow.