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The Right Time

March 28, 2013
By Anonymous

I see you over there
The smell of spring is in the air
You start toward me
And suddenly I cant breathe
Hey, can’t you see me
I’m standing right here
Won’t you whisper something in my ear
Hold my hand
And let’s make plans

But I guess right now it’s just not time
But someday you will be mine
Someday I’ll kiss you in the rain
Someday you’ll be the one who takes away all the pain
You’ll be the first and the last thing I see
Of every day
But I guess it will just have to wait
Til it’s time

I know you stare
And when I look
You act like you don’t care
But it’s obvious that I make you smile
Sometimes it feels like I’ve known you for a while
I just wish we could be together
I know we’d be forever

I guess it’s just not time
But someday you will be mine
Someday I’ll kiss you in the rain
Someday you’ll be the one who takes away all the pain
You’ll be the first and the last thing I see
Of every day
But I guess it will just have to wait
Til it’s time

Did our hands just touch
Why do I feel I need you so much
Please won’t you say something to me

I guess it’s just not time
But someday you will be mine
Someday I’ll kiss you in the rain
Someday you’ll be the one who takes away all the pain
You’ll be the first and the last thing I see
Of every day
But I guess it will just have to wait
Til it’s time

When it’s time
You’ll be mine
I know when it’s time
You’re gonna be mine
Forever and always mine
When it’s time


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swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 10:34 am
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
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Great job with delivering your message. Maybe work on the rhyme scheme of the last few lines of the chorus and try not to use the word "someday" as the first word in the line three times in a row. Nice imagery in the second line of the first verse and good job with the bridge.