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I love you so

March 1, 2013
By Rinniedesu SILVER, Oxnard, California
Rinniedesu SILVER, Oxnard, California
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I love you so.

I wake up in the night seeking your love,
Wondering, hoping, searching the stars above.
I wish you knew,
All this time that I have loved you.
But you were here and gone,
just like the words of this song.
You left with no goodbye,
how did our moments just fly by?
I want you at my side,
did you not feel our hearts collide?
But there he goes,
yet I think he knows.
My heart beats as I set a stare,
and then he turns and shows his care.

Don't leave me again,
you are my best friend.
You're my knight,
the only one that calms my fright.
Come back to me,
so that you can see,
and that you should know,
that I love you so.

It seems like
I've dreamt of you all of my life.
But now that you're gone,
it feels like I'm lost in the middle of the ocean.
I'm caught with nothing and no one,
to guide me into the shining sun.
I look up, hoping for a sign,
and there you are, casting a lifeline.
Don't leave me be,
you're the only way out of this lonely sea.
But there he goes,
yet I think he knows.
My heart beats as I set a stare,
and then he turns and shows his care.

Don't leave me again,
you are my best friend.
You're my knight,
the only one that calms my fright.
Come back to me,
so that you can see,
and that you should know,
that I love you so.

Finally he returns and with a kiss,
he shows how much I was missed.
"I will never leave again", he says as he kneels low,
and with a ring he says, "I love you so."



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on Mar. 20 2013 at 11:33 am
Rinniedesu SILVER, Oxnard, California
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Thank you for your feedback. I will put a pin in that.

on Mar. 20 2013 at 11:30 am
Rinniedesu SILVER, Oxnard, California
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Thank you for your critique.

on Mar. 20 2013 at 11:30 am
Rinniedesu SILVER, Oxnard, California
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Thank you for your feedback. It did not start out with "I love you so", that was the title. :)

on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:19 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, it's just a reason for someone not to try.

Love this song but it has a little too much punctuation commas are fine just not so many periods, other than that 5 stars.

on Mar. 17 2013 at 5:51 pm
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

I liked the overall idea of this song-- but maybe not to start it off with "I love you so"? I just felt that didn't fit in.