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Real eyes

July 21, 2011
By RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.


My Head is stuck in the clouds...

But my feet just stick to the ground.

Everything seems to be working out..

But i can't help to think...



Real Eye's, Realize, Real lies!

Why Can't my real eyes see through your Real lies?



Your just a fake..

You reap and you take..

Away from my pride..

Away from my heart

Why don't I see that's all you can be!



My Real eyes, don't realize your real lies!

Why can't my real eyes, see through your real lies?



I Just can't bare...

They way you can stare..

And make me feel..

You just make me feel

like nothing can go wrong!



But my Real Eyes.

Don't Realize!

Your real lies!!


The author's comments:
It's not finished but I just had the urge to write.. this is what came out..

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on Oct. 15 2011 at 9:04 am
RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.

Thank you :)_

on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:50 am
RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.

Thank you all :)

on Jul. 28 2011 at 2:15 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i agree with all the comments. wow keep writing songs:)

on Jul. 26 2011 at 9:05 pm
trampledsun_ BRONZE, Bristol, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever happens, happens. If you waste your time clinging to the past, your whole life will revolve around a figment of days gone by.

I like the rhyme scheme(:

on Jul. 25 2011 at 7:52 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

true dat ^^ Awesome work

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on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:55 pm
Brianna Long, Belle Harbor, New York
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Very creative=)