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Dying inside

March 11, 2010
By Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like an ice cream cone. Not really but I am super hungry right now!"- Me


You told me to get over you
You told me we were done
I tried my hardest to forget
But your my number one
I fell so hard
It kills inside

I can't forget you
Your, your my only one
It kills just to see her
Tell me why


The author's comments:
This is all i have right now. Do you like it?

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on May. 12 2011 at 12:37 pm
Mrs.Lautner GOLD, Fife Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
someone asked me if i knew you <br /> i turned my head wiped my tears away <br /> and said no not anymore<br /> <br /> Gravitation isn&#039;t responsible for people falling in love.<br /> <br /> The hottest love has the coldest ending

I love it its just like wht i am going through

 


on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:58 pm
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?&quot;

Thanks! I will

on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:11 am
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_, Aztec, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I learned what is obvious to a child. That life is simply a collection of little lives, each lived one day at a time. That each day should be spent finding beauty in flowers and poetry and talking to animals. That a day spent with dreaming and sunsets and refreshing breezes cannot be bettered.&rdquo;

keep writing please! i agree i love it! that is like the hardest thing to go through so i know how people feel and excspecially if  you were together a really long time!

on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:10 am
_DEIDRA_THURMAN_, Aztec, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I learned what is obvious to a child. That life is simply a collection of little lives, each lived one day at a time. That each day should be spent finding beauty in flowers and poetry and talking to animals. That a day spent with dreaming and sunsets and refreshing breezes cannot be bettered.&rdquo;

GOOD JOB! keep writing please i did go threw that and i know what it is like! thanks for making my old break up better! keep up the good work and im sorry for your break up. i know what its like! 

on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:53 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

love it

keep writing please?


on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:01 pm
Rozababe SILVER, Evergreen, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is like an ice cream cone. Not really but I am super hungry right now!&quot;- Me

I will! The pain from a breakup sent me into a writers heaven. He hurt me, it made me write to get away from the world. I spent hours laying in bed writing. I loved him. He made me hurt and the only way i could even try to get away was writing. Now i have someone to write for. That is why i wrote my story Summer Love. Check it out :)

on Mar. 27 2010 at 9:12 am
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?&quot;

I really like this! Please add more if you can. I'm actually going through that exact problem right now, so it was great reading this.