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Silent, Starving for Air

February 18, 2010
By noUnity BRONZE, Hartford, Wisconsin
noUnity BRONZE, Hartford, Wisconsin
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It belongs to me
This feeling
I feel stretched like a thousand ropes tied
Pulling me in every direction
I own the key to this feeling
No one can decide when it’s opened
Or when it closes
I typically keep it locked, though
It’s desire to produce consumes me
like a Venus fly trap after days of hunger, and uneasiness

It’s everything I once had
A dusty dream no wind can blow off
And as I hear that name repeated
My head bows down once again
And I find myself too weak
Too afraid
To unlock it.



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on Feb. 24 2010 at 2:34 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

noUnity said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:13 am
beautiful, well written bud