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This Sweet Pain

November 22, 2009
By Drummerboy PLATINUM, Sparta, Tennessee
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Drummerboy PLATINUM, Sparta, Tennessee
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"One band one sound", " I don't love you because you're beautiful. You're beautiful because I love you"

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I feel this sweet pain.
My breaking,acheing heart,
is coming back again.
It's ripping me apart.

There is nooone around,
all I hear is the sound
of my broken heart.
I have to make a new start.

I thought I found the one,
that knocked me off my feet.
I thought I had the one,
that made me feel complete.

When I looked into her eyes,
there was all truth,no lies.
When I held her close and tight,
she would never put up a fight.

Now,I feel this sweet pain.
My breaking,acheing heart
is back yet again,
Cause she ripped me apart.

The author's comments:
I can only hope from the clues,that you figure out why I wrote this.I did it to the best of my abilities while going from my memories and thinking of the past.
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Violetheartt BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:15 pm
Violetheartt BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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That's so sad!! :(
accident_prone_ SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 2:31 am
accident_prone_ SILVER, Sparta, Tennessee
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Sad face :(