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Numb Now
November 1, 2009
eyeliner in the form of tear drops listen to the clock as it goes tic toc as another heartbreaks watch the cigarette smoke as it fills the room and alcohol fumes cover me like tattoos as another heart breaks
Chorus
Well i say you don't know the pain you say you feel the same well i say you don't feel s***
verse 2
Well i've been stuck in my ways yea i've been stuck for more than days but i'm trying to make a change yea i know you heard it all way before but here i stand a broken looking at these broken plans and all i wanted to do was take your left hand but jesus christ i'm so tried of all the fights so if you don't wanna leave i'll pack my things and be on that first flight
chorus
well i say you don't know the pain and you say you fell the same but i say you don't fell s*** no you dont fell s*** well i don't fell s*** anymore
© Jeff H., Marblehead, MA
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musicislife GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 6:43 pm
that school sucks im sorry lol i went to edison for awhile and its about as bad lol umm the only thing i can really tell you is not to force anything just let it for out and be true to what ever feeling your having while writing the song
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 25 2009 at 7:45 pm
Hey I live in fairfax too! I go to TJ...i dunno im kinda new to song writing and a few tips could be useful.
hopeless dreamer said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 8:13 pm
yep mi motto tink outside da box
musicislife GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 3:05 pm
hmmm i never really thought about it lol
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 6:08 am
Um, Good Song! Could you please look at the poem "Answer Me" by Moonbeam13, then tell me what you think? Thanks!
hopless dreamer said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 7:53 pm
hey that can make a really great duet<3 ;}
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 11:38 am
Hai thurr hunny. :)
How are ya?
How are ya?
musicislife GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 12:52 pm
wow another ryan adams fan sweet and thanks so much
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 11:13 am
Well, hello there.
You are, amazing. This song caught my eye, and wow. Love it. Anyways, just wanted to let you know, (And I'm TOTALLY not trying to sound stalkerish here...) I checked yer profile on here to view the rest of your work and stuff, and just wanted to say, I agree... Ryan Adams is ftw. <3
I write music as well. I've played piano for about 10 years, and I'mma be 17 in Jan. :P But yeah. I look forward to more of your stuff, hun. :)
Keep in touch, I can't wait for more!
~Reaa.Mae~ <3
You are, amazing. This song caught my eye, and wow. Love it. Anyways, just wanted to let you know, (And I'm TOTALLY not trying to sound stalkerish here...) I checked yer profile on here to view the rest of your work and stuff, and just wanted to say, I agree... Ryan Adams is ftw. <3
I write music as well. I've played piano for about 10 years, and I'mma be 17 in Jan. :P But yeah. I look forward to more of your stuff, hun. :)
Keep in touch, I can't wait for more!
~Reaa.Mae~ <3
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:52 pm
so ya.... i loved talking to you, gnight :D
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:44 pm
you do?? that cool, i wish i lived in a hotel...that would be cool. im sorry bout the bread pudding, that sucks lol
musicislife GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:34 pm
lol and dont feel bad i live in a freaking hotel
musicislife GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:34 pm
yes but it wasn't that good so i went out and sat in the car listening to music
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:33 pm
thnx ya... i dont have a phone, i am too poor to afford one so ima use my cousins<br />
and did you get your bread pudding? haha that stuff is so gross :P
and did you get your bread pudding? haha that stuff is so gross :P
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:28 pm
yuck... what is your number ill just txt you
musicislife GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:24 pm
lol bleh they came back for me and forced me with promises of bread pudding lol
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 12:14 pm
i understand :)
im hiding in my bedroom, there is like 19 people in my house... its pretty crazy. im glad your stayin home cause you can talk to me ;)
im hiding in my bedroom, there is like 19 people in my house... its pretty crazy. im glad your stayin home cause you can talk to me ;)
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