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November 1, 2009
By musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

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eyeliner in the form of tear drops listen to the clock as it goes tic toc as another heartbreaks watch the cigarette smoke as it fills the room and alcohol fumes cover me like tattoos as another heart breaks

Chorus
Well i say you don't know the pain you say you feel the same well i say you don't feel s***

verse 2
Well i've been stuck in my ways yea i've been stuck for more than days but i'm trying to make a change yea i know you heard it all way before but here i stand a broken looking at these broken plans and all i wanted to do was take your left hand but jesus christ i'm so tried of all the fights so if you don't wanna leave i'll pack my things and be on that first flight

chorus
well i say you don't know the pain and you say you fell the same but i say you don't fell s*** no you dont fell s*** well i don't fell s*** anymore

© Jeff H., Marblehead, MA

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Lana15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2012 at 10:31 pm
Lana15 BRONZE, Matteson, Illinois
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I like this! Its honest!
RitaRules said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 1:14 pm
RitaRules, Paris, Tennessee
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I would've enjoyed this if it wasn't depressing. And if you actually capitalized some words.
naruto freak said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:14 pm
why did you useso much swering like you used to much of the word s*** other than that it's good
Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:27 pm
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
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this is a magnificent peice
theunimaginable BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:35 am
theunimaginable BRONZE, Koshkonong, Missouri
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This is just amazing. It just blows my mind how awesome this is :) Great job!!
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:05 am
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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I really like this! I love the lines with the "smoke like tattoos" and how you talk about wanting to change and also saying how if they can't leave you're more then willing to go! This is phenominal!
Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:34 pm
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
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I like this song, I think it has real potential. the line "alcohol fumes cover me like tattoos" is a great line. My only suggestion is to find a way to make your chorus stronger. Maybe have a really strong line in there, just to continue to keep the listeners attention through the piece. Good work!

 

StarsandBrokenHearts BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 5:17 pm
StarsandBrokenHearts BRONZE, Kanab, Utah
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wow i really love this! it's great!
SadieJayy BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 2:45 am
SadieJayy BRONZE, Lamar, Missouri
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"eyeliner in the form of tear drops listen to the clock as it goes tic toc"

I love it!

hun, you are truly amazing!
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 4:48 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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:)your welcome and yeah i like some of their songs
musicislife GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:36 am
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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thanks and somewhat
musicislife GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:35 am
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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in the end the big picture doesn&#039;t even matter it&#039;s the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

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not really trying to say anything to people at all just stories of my life
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 12:28 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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i like this, it's edgy it reminds me of staind, do you listen to them?
kaiaray said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 12:47 pm
this is goo i like it but what is it tryin too say to ppl
musicislife GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:54 pm
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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in the end the big picture doesn&#039;t even matter it&#039;s the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

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thanks ya i cant seem to top this one lol
Infear&Faith. SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:27 pm
Infear&Faith. SILVER, Kenton, Ohio
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<3 this is awesome
musicislife GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:50 pm
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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in the end the big picture doesn&#039;t even matter it&#039;s the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

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thanks ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
mellow_melon PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:17 am
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
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wow that was really good! i love it!
SoulSurvivor92 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 11:02 am
SoulSurvivor92 BRONZE, Park Ridge, Illinois
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I like this poem so much. Its so beautiful and full of emotion. Keep working.
ElizNieves PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:35 pm
ElizNieves PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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This reminds me of Green Day's lyrics