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If He Knew

May 15, 2022
By gaminglemon2233 BRONZE, Fishersville, Virginia
gaminglemon2233 BRONZE, Fishersville, Virginia
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So Long Ago, 

I Remember Now

Oh, No Hold Me Back 

Down, Down, Down

If I tried,

To go, would you know 

Baby, Oh No I want to know

Now, I Can't Even sleep,

Hold me So I can get peace

If It Matters, Youll Know

Please Don't Ever Go


The author's comments:

I Don't Know I Just thought I try


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on May. 19 2022 at 5:54 pm
gaminglemon2233 BRONZE, Fishersville, Virginia
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@The-Night thank u so much for your kind words. This is the motivation I need to keep writing.

on May. 19 2022 at 3:14 pm
The-Night BRONZE, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times if one only remembers to turn on the light."
-Albus Dumbledore

This is pretty good. I actually write full songs all the time and was immediately drawn to these lyrics. They for sure have potential. I'd love to see the whole song. :)