i...i really have nun to say cuz i didnt really have a mother growing up really she was a well she lived in th streets and did deugs an would come to visit me in my brothers sometimes but only to get some money frum us or food r a place to stay for a while then she would leave for onother month..so yeah sometimes i dont think she even give a chizz bout us..  

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I can tell that your emotions went into this poem. I can feel what you are trying to convey, and you used some powerful words. On a more constructive note, there are some problems with the number of syllables per line. The format has a ways to go before it is a true limerick. Try reading your poem aloud and see which parts flow better than others. Also, (and this is something I have to work on in my own poetry as well) more punctuation would be a good idea. It would make the poem clearer.   Overall, though, great work! I will try to check out some more of your poems! P.S. You totally don't have to, but... I have a limerick posted called "My Socks". If you want to check it out and tell me what you think, I would love it. Thanks so much!   --KnitsAndPurls