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life in a bombshell

December 14, 2011
By loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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&quot;I live for the nights I can&#039;t remember with the people I will never forget.&quot; -Carassisa M-&lt;3<br /> <br /> &quot;What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve.&quot; -Softball Coach Steve B-

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We live, we love,
we laugh, we cry,
we will all one day
grow old and die.

Some are scared,
others embrace
the challenge,
and join the race.

Times are changing
and we try to keep up,
words like whats up,
turn into just "sup?"

People are cruel,
people are mean,
making fun of others
just because they aren't lean.

Looks are not everything
but that's not how it seems
your getting dissed
if your not in the right jeans.

But one day they will wake up
and maybe they'll realize
that a life is well wasted
when it's built on lies.

© Mary Amor, Fullerton, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because I live in a small town, and I am so used to seeing people getting made fun of. I have talked to my dad about this and his reason is "It's just small town politics." That's ridiculous. It shouldn't be this way.
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This article has 8 comments.

SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:15 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Brilliant! You have a brilliant mind! An amazing writer! I can also relate to this I live in a small town. 5 stars! Hope you have a very amazing day! I love it!!:D
applesauceHater SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 6:44 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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I live in a small place too so I can easily relate. Some people have nothing better to do. Very relatable poem. And love your poem structure and word placing. It's really interesting!
loveissmiles GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 10:46 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I live for the nights I can&#039;t remember with the people I will never forget.&quot; -Carassisa M-&lt;3<br /> <br /> &quot;What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve.&quot; -Softball Coach Steve B-

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read it, loved it, commented! :)
AgentOrange789 GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:18 am
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 59 comments

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&quot;It&#039;s a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where.&quot;<br /> -James Clavell, &quot;Shogun&quot;

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Thank you. Thank you very much for writing this. Makes a perfect statement. Could you read my poem "A Poem from Planet Mars"? Thanks.
loveissmiles GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 7:03 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I live for the nights I can&#039;t remember with the people I will never forget.&quot; -Carassisa M-&lt;3<br /> <br /> &quot;What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve.&quot; -Softball Coach Steve B-

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oh my god, thank you so much for agreeing with me! :) and liking my poem!
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:56 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you&#039;re not 1st you&#039;re last&quot;

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Tell it sister! Testify! The first and last stanza were brillent and i really like this :) 5/5
Sharkgirl SILVER said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:18 pm
Sharkgirl SILVER, Honolulu, Hawaii
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

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Brave men may not live forever, but cautious men do not live at all.<br /> Author Unknown

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I couldn't agree with you more great job
amahzing_grace GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 9:50 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody&#039;s praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings. <br /> -Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

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oh my gosh! thank you! someone finally sees what i see! it's so true that popularity all depends on what clothes you wear or where you shop. that's not what popularity is. popularity is having a lot of friends and i thought i was the only one who realized this. but obviously not. love this poem (: