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Would you?

April 20, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

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Would you?
Would you be my love?
Would you stay with me…
Forever by my side would you be?
Hold me when I’m sad,
And keep me smiling when I’m glad?
When I have a bad day…
Will you help the memories go away?
When I’m hyper…
Be there to play?
When I cry…
Hold me till each tear drop is dry?
When I’m mad…
Make me laugh?
When I’m lonely…
By my side would you be…
And forever would you love me?

© Dana Marie M., Wading River, NY

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Love inspired this... dedicated to Eli <3
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SavvyLane PLATINUM said...
on May. 8 2010 at 10:22 am
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If youre a bird, Im a bird.&quot;

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You will find  your special someone no lies :) and ty for the comment.
perfected_11 SILVER said...
on May. 8 2010 at 10:02 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L

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everybody needs somebody like that and i loved your poem. Im still waiting on that person to come.

check out some of mine please