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When im with you

February 28, 2010
By OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥be who YOU want to be, not what OTHERS want to see. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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When im with you,
i feel alive, no more tears running from my eyes.

When im with you,
i dream so sweetly, kissing you ever so neatly.

When im with you,
i dont feel scared, my personal bodyguard always prepared.

© Michelle W., Ada, MI

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justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 5:00 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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&quot;You live but once, you might as well be amusing.&quot; -Coco Chanel<br /> &quot;Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&quot; -Richard Bach <br /> &quot;Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love.&quot; -Einstein

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I'd love for it to be longer, it's so good. Keep writing. I love the ending, how you referred to him as a body gaurd.