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Four letter word

February 15, 2010
By thescientistyellow GOLD, Nauvoo, Alabama
thescientistyellow GOLD, Nauvoo, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"If everybody is thinking alike, then somebody isn't thinking." - George S. Patton


Love isn't just a four letter word.
Add "d" and it becomes a verb.
Add "es" to see present tense,
As in "Rebecca loves Vince."
But it's a shame that Vince loves only Kurt.


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on Nov. 13 2011 at 1:28 pm
meadowood BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
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"For by grace you have been saved through faith." -Ephesians 2:8a

Um - awesome!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:23 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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My fav quote (4now)<br /> When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon &amp; cold became heat.... Roses weren&#039;t red an violetes weren&#039;t blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU &lt;3

HAHAHA LOL FUNI

lollypops GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:31 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Live

good job love the rhymth

on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:30 pm
very cute and funny:)

on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:20 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

this is really good!! i applaud u :D

*Myrissa* said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 11:31 am
*Myrissa*, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Whether you live in the past, thrive in the present or look to the future, your never a second away from happiness.&quot;

I think the endings perfect it leaves you hanging like, "What does that mean?" or "why did he say that." its so unique. like he just let you fall on all the things he could've said at the end. Nice work.

*Myrissa* said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 11:29 am
*Myrissa*, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Whether you live in the past, thrive in the present or look to the future, your never a second away from happiness.&quot;

Thats an intresting way to look at the word. i mean i've read like hundreds of poem concerning love but this one, it takes on an idea of its own. i like it. maybe you can expand on it cus im so wanting more!!!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:11 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

lol. i loved it!! it was cute and thoughtful. check out a few of mine and let me kno watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.

EdwardP BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:50 pm
EdwardP BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
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Did I cause your problems; Then don&#039;t tell me about them!

nEAT AND CREATIVE iTS VOCABY

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:20 am
chocolateharp SILVER, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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&quot;Dear God,&quot; she prayed, &quot;let me be something every minute of every hour of my life. Let me be gay; let me be sad. Let me be cold; let me be warm. Let me be hungry...have too much to eat. Let me be ragged or well dressed. Let me be sincere - be deceitful. Let me be truthful; let me be a liar. Let me be honorable and let me sin. Only let me be something every blessed minute. And when I sleep, let me dream all the time so that not one little piece of living is ever lost.&quot; - Betty Smith (A Tree Grows in Brooklyn)

This is so creative! The second line is a little confusing because of the "es"- to makes "loves" you only need an "s". I really liked the poem, though!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:40 pm
LihuaEmily SILVER, North Kingstown, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is said that there&#039;s no such thing as a free lunch. But the universe is the ultimate free lunch.&quot; -Alan Guth

So very quirky, a very interesting piece.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 10:00 pm
thescientistyellow GOLD, Nauvoo, Alabama
11 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If everybody is thinking alike, then somebody isn&#039;t thinking.&quot; - George S. Patton

A mixture of English grammar rules and my own take on love...

on Feb. 21 2010 at 7:47 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You have enemies? Good. That means you&#039;ve stood up for something, sometime in your life.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Winston Chuchill

Clever! Where'd you get the idea for this?

on Feb. 21 2010 at 10:12 am
SmileyFace94 SILVER, Queens, New York
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this is great! i especially love the beginning.

on Feb. 20 2010 at 8:33 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

The beginning is good, but I agree with ToriLovett, the ending doesn't really flow. Good job though (:

on Feb. 20 2010 at 8:08 pm
Tori.Lovett GOLD, Alexandria, Louisiana
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Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~William Wordsworth<br /> --------<br /> The wastebasket is a writer&#039;s best friend. ~Isaac Bashevis Singer

The beginning is nice... The ending doesn't flow that well. Other than that, great(:

on Feb. 20 2010 at 9:59 am
thescientistyellow GOLD, Nauvoo, Alabama
11 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If everybody is thinking alike, then somebody isn&#039;t thinking.&quot; - George S. Patton

Thank you! Well the reason for the length is because it's a traditional limerick..

on Feb. 20 2010 at 9:48 am
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I really, really liked the beginning! I wish you made it longer... I really liked it.