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War and Pain MAG

February 3, 2017
By Garlicbreadfast BRONZE, Tampa , Florida
Garlicbreadfast BRONZE, Tampa , Florida
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Unresolved anger
Vented through the lives of others
Embraced by demons’ arms



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Jakekin said...
on Apr. 27 2018 at 1:29 pm
Jakekin, Grandville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Row the Boat"

Very good poem. It does a great job of describing your opinions on the topic.

FelipeLeMone said...
on Mar. 15 2017 at 4:16 pm
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This isn't proper haiku format. The proper haiku format is 5-7-5 syllables. You have 5-8-6. Really good descriptions though.