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wishes

November 11, 2014
By The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
44 articles 2 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"


contemplating life
reaching out to touch the stars
wish I could make it



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on Apr. 1 2015 at 6:40 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Ahh, you didn't have to read it, but thank you very much. I hope you didn't feel pressured too or anything. I do think you did a much better job, though.

on Apr. 1 2015 at 4:39 pm
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
44 articles 2 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"

I really liked your poem on wishes (and congrats on the editor's choice for that too, it was awesome!) I think that it's okay to break format sometimes (in my opinion, that's what makes poetry so lovely) Anyway, I really liked your one on wishes :)

on Apr. 1 2015 at 2:30 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I also wrote a poem about wishes, and it's very interesting to read your haiku on the same subject. (You did much better than me-I didn't even follow the structure.) Good job!