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Ketchuppy

August 16, 2014
By Eleanor4 PLATINUM, Christchurch, Other
Eleanor4 PLATINUM, Christchurch, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A poet can survive everything but a misprint.<br /> - Oscar Wilde


You promised me the moon
But all you could deliver
Was a stale pizza with a ketchuppy
I love you


The author's comments:
Non-tradition haiku

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Longlegs GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2014 at 10:08 am
Longlegs GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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1) It is not a haiku at all. 2) It sounds incomplete. But not bad. Don't get discouraged.