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Sweet Sugar Snowflakes

July 29, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Sweet sugar snowflakes
Rush down to greet my cold tongue
I savour the snow

© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA

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I have been attempting Haiku lately...tell me what you think! ^_^
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Sep. 25 2014 at 8:56 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks so much! I'm glad you found it life-like ^_^
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2014 at 3:10 pm
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE, New Castle, Indiana
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&quot;I write only because<br /> there is a voice within me<br /> that will not be still.&quot;<br /> ~ SYLVIA PLATH<br /> <br /> (MY FORMER ACCOUNTS: Icantwrite &amp; Punk.Snowflake)<br /> Published poems from my former accounts:<br /> - FRAIL HOPE (Icantwrite)<br /> - YOURSELF (Punk.Snowflake)

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I really like this. The imagery is vivid, perfect for a small poem like this. You captured a very real snapshot of a small and beautiful moment with words...Very well done!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Sep. 13 2014 at 1:29 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
KaavyaM SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 9:28 am
KaavyaM SILVER, Hyderabad, Other
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This is some great imagery, and a lovely haiku. Keep writing them. :)