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perfect days

May 14, 2014
By emmastevenson BRONZE, Orono, Minnesota
emmastevenson BRONZE, Orono, Minnesota
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Blistering hot sun,
ocean crashing on the beach,
perfect happiness


The author's comments:
I hope people just take into account natures beauty.

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1299836 said...
on May. 18 2014 at 9:22 pm
1299836, 1299836, California
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i love how you put commas after the first two lines because it slows the reader down and allows them to think about the imagery. i like the beach too