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Leaking Sunbeams

May 31, 2013
By Unoverrated SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
Unoverrated SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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A golden haze shines,
Caressing the harbor’s cheek,
A questioning touch.



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on Jun. 4 2013 at 11:36 pm
Unoverrated SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Thanks! And so the light rays are questioning because I ment to convey a mysterious tone at the end of the poem (:

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on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:46 pm
1299836, 1299836, California
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i love the second line so much! That is great writing. And a quick question: i dont really understand the last line. what do u mean the light rays are questioning? please reply