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nice dream/birds on a wire/top of the rock

April 16, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius


it was a nice dream;
you were climbing a mountain
and you didn’t fall.

your hair had grown out
you laughed like birds on a wire
nimbly balancing

on Top of the Rock
high away and far asleep
you reminded me.



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on Apr. 20 2013 at 12:17 pm
annafranna BRONZE, Eldersburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." ~Dr. Seuss

Such a cool poem!  I love the dreamy mood it incorporates.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:39 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

Absolutely love the titile. Why shouldn't they be long once in while? :) You're always posted amazing work. Keep it up, MyApocalytic.