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nice dream/birds on a wire/top of the rock

April 16, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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it was a nice dream;
you were climbing a mountain
and you didn’t fall.

your hair had grown out
you laughed like birds on a wire
nimbly balancing

on Top of the Rock
high away and far asleep
you reminded me.

© Andy G., Phoenix, AZ

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annafranna BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 12:17 pm
annafranna BRONZE, Eldersburg, Maryland
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Such a cool poem!  I love the dreamy mood it incorporates.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:39 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Absolutely love the titile. Why shouldn't they be long once in while? :) You're always posted amazing work. Keep it up, MyApocalytic.