these hazy hours | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Haiku
  4. these hazy hours

these hazy hours

February 4, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
More by this author
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
240 articles 20 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

View profile

I.
These hazy hours,
dozing off and on in the
company of friends,

II.
surreal six am
bedtime Bob Dylan peace of
knowing we’re alive,

III.
And in the morning
I made the coffee too strong
and we said goodbye

IV.
to the sweetness of
a midwinter’s weekend’s dream,
and of growing up.

© Olivia E., Alto, MI

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Buzz Off Haiku
By Miss_Independent GOLD
Keller, Texas
Miss_Independent GOLD, Keller, Texas
18 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked.

View profile
Poetry
way out west
By cole herington BRONZE
Lubbock, Texas
cole herington BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Roundup
By Connor MacNair BRONZE
Wolfforth, Texas
Connor MacNair BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Pride
By Dylon Craig BRONZE
Lubbock, Texas
Dylon Craig BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Rodeo On a Saturday Night
By HaileyM BRONZE
Lubbock, Texas
HaileyM BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
My Texas
By tori_Lou GOLD
Wolfforth, Texas
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 21 2013 at 4:59 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

View profile
I don't really get to hang-out that much with my friends. So envisioning what you portray here in this poem for is so enjoyable. I especially like the images of the strong coffee (I'm a coffee person; I think Dr. Drew might invite me to be on his rehab show; too bad it's canceled) and the image of Bob Dylan. I love his music. The images are peaceful. And frienship couldn't be better portrayed than here.