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May 23, 2012
By Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else.&quot;<br /> &quot;we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through&quot;<br /> &ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo;

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Your fluorescent eyes
Remind me of a clear sky,
simply beautiful.

© Joseph B., Mesquite, TX

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Maddie_Rae PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2012 at 10:00 pm
Maddie_Rae PLATINUM, Newalla, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I write my life in ink, that way i can still remember the good things, and yet i can never erase my mistakes.

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I liked how you described his eyes as "flourecent"! great word description!