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It Shifts Under Our Weight

August 27, 2011
By Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott


Shaking quietly
To move those who defiled
Earth with their debris



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on Oct. 16 2011 at 7:16 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

I will, as soon as I can.

on Oct. 15 2011 at 8:30 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
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&quot;We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate&quot; earl of beaconsville.

im glad someone else is passionate about the earth. check out my haiku about nature? its called crow's wings

on Sep. 10 2011 at 5:05 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

Please tell me what you think. Is it effective? Is it not? I don't know much about writing haikus, so I need feedbacks and ratings to tell me how I did.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 5:35 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

Earth. Thanks.

Dude123 SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 2:46 pm
Dude123 SILVER, Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
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Is this about the grass or earth?  Either way, nice way of expressing how the planet sort of shivers in the face of man