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Redemption for a Broken Man

August 4, 2011
By Anonymous

Mark David Chapman
In the dark, humming the words
To “Here Comes the Sun”


The author's comments:
Everyone dreams of deliverance.

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on Aug. 11 2011 at 1:58 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Pity. What a great thrill it would have been to do so! 'Specially since you were in the mountains, where the spirits are in everything. Perhaps there will come another day when one can drink from it, however.

Just passing on a message, dear. ;)


on Aug. 11 2011 at 12:31 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

In the name of Jesus and the Christ within, amen. 

I lamented the fact that we could not drink straight from the cold mountain stream downhill from our camp, like they once used to, as near in the past as the eighties, I am told by my mom. 

I feel your words, and the words of the ancients, and the words in my heart in what you have said. 


on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:40 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

The trees said this: Gather our leaves and eat of our fruit, for this is how you will feel the sunshine crinkle in your hands and taste the raindrops which fell from the sky long ago. By doing so, you will make the world yourself and yourself the world. What lives is living on the edge, where the light pores into the darkness. But wherever you go, that is where you are. And you are a daring star, so shine!

Like I said, I'm only passing on a message, I don't know exactly what that meant. And it's difficult to get all of that across through a caw, so I thought I would do my best to transalte, just to make sure.


on Aug. 10 2011 at 4:41 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

I do wish, kind sir. Have I not already heard it? If that is so, I beg of thee to be kind enough to relay it once more. 

on Aug. 10 2011 at 4:32 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Dost thou not wish to hear it?

on Aug. 9 2011 at 7:33 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

One pleasant aspect of haikus is that they are as fulfilling to write as they are to read.

I didn't know whether or not you could understand me, as I opened my beak and let my soul spill out (splashing when it hit the air) through a caw as honest as a caw can be. I was trying to pass you a message, as I heard it from the trees, while they rustled in the wind.


on Aug. 9 2011 at 5:46 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Oh wow, it settles quietly on the mind, understood or no. I love the way that haikus quiet the soul and fill the heart.

I heard you in the woods yesterday, I thought you were a crow. You were unusually loud. I tried to answer your caws, but I couldn't shape the sounds right. 


on Aug. 9 2011 at 5:39 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Oh, I look forward to reading it!

I know! It's taken one of mine forever to get posted, and it's really starting to irk me.


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 2:36 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

By the way, I just published my first haiku on Teen Ink.

(You know how long it takes to get it posted here though)


on Aug. 9 2011 at 11:07 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Good. :)

I like the Beatles as well, especially their later music.


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 6:50 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

That makes sense now.

How ironic that he killed John Lennon(because he was a huge fan of his)

I really like The Beatles. I'm a big fan of them. :)


on Aug. 8 2011 at 5:22 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Ah, kinda have to know that to get the poem. :)

He's the guy who shot John Lennon. He had a quite few mental issues and a sad life, and that's why I hope that he "dreams of deliverance."


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 1:53 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

Who's Mark David Chapman?

on Aug. 8 2011 at 12:13 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Thank you! I wanted to write something about Mark David Chapman, and how sad is story was; and I thought it came across best in a haiku.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 6:34 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

Good, strong haiku. Like it! :)