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Seeing Your Soul

July 10, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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"I can do anything!"

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Looking in your eyes
I don't see just one color
I see a rainbow!

© Brian M., Fishers, IN

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redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:27 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

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That is very sweet of you to say! Thank you for the feedback! I would like to expand the poem, but I'm not sure what else to say.
fictitious-quandary GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:16 pm
fictitious-quandary GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Knowing is not enough; we must apply.<br /> Willing is not enough; we must do.<br /> Johann Wolfgang von Goethe<br /> <br /> &quot;Whether you think you can or you think you can&#039;t, you&#039;re right&quot;<br /> - Henry Ford

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 Your a wonderful writer but I prefer length, to me a three line poem is just a tease, much like the commercials to all the wonderful movies I want to see, just a small portion, expand on your writing because your thoughts are great! :)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:14 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Thank you everyone for your comments. I really appreciate the feedback!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:28 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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That is such a sweet comment! Thanks!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:26 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Thank you!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 12:26 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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I love haiku because it is sooooo simple!
Blondie said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:18 pm
Your haiku can pertain to a sensitivity to others as unique individuals,i.e.recognizing and respecting people of different races, creeds, etc.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:06 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Right now it's a simple haiku, but I'm thinking about turning it into a long free verse poem!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:05 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Cute dog pic on your profile!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 5:00 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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I have this idea that our eyes are the windows to our soul.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:58 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Gee thanks!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:54 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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I usually think about something ordinary (like an eye) and then try to give it either a fun or a deeper meaning. Also, reading other people's work on TI gives me a chance to see what's popular. It's all about trying to come up with something that hasn't already been written. (There must be a million break up songs out there!)  
NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 3:35 pm
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The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.<br /> ~Some random person on the Internet :P

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Cool haiku :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 1:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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u r so creative how do u come up with theses do they just come to u or what? ur talented keep on writing
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:25 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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^^ I have more haiku on TI if you want to check it out!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:24 am
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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I'm glad that you all like it so much!
Uga10 SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:59 am
Uga10 SILVER, Verbena, Alabama
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its good and by the way people, its supposed to be short.its a Haiku.lol
CieraDesiree GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:12 am
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
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I love this one=)
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:44 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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It's nice but as Fox said there should have been more to it...But It's good:)
austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:07 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Haha, what a cute haiku! :) Short, sweet, and to the point.