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3 100% Authentic Japanese Haikus

January 14, 2010
By linewriter1228 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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CASTLE IN THE SKY
Castle in the sky
Subtle Beauty Mountain top
Carry me away

SHIBUYA
Times square without cars
teens in baby doll dresses
adrenaline rush

THE VIEW FROM MOUNT FUJI
Clouds are everywhere
Drove for three hours to see this
Can't see my own feet

© Joseph B., Mesquite, TX

The author's comments:
I went on a trip to Japan last March and picked three of the most inspiring sights and tried to describe them using authentic Japanese poetry.
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