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Suffering from Seasonal Haikus

December 7, 2009
By Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER, Kenosha, Wisconsin
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Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER, Kenosha, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Women and cats will do as they please, and men and dogs should relax and get used to the idea.<br /> &mdash;Anon<br /> <br /> A Freudian slip is when you say one thing but mean your mother.<br /> -Anon

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Winter born creatures
Skate on frosty glass dewdrops
Breathing foggy air

Autumn leaves falling
Gracefully to the ground
Crunching beneath me

Summer heat rises
From the blacktop driveways
Soaking shirts in sweat

Spring fever arrives
To greet the world and announce
The birth of new life

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The haiku is my favourite form of poetry.
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Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 5:55 pm
Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER, Kenosha, Wisconsin
5 articles 10 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Women and cats will do as they please, and men and dogs should relax and get used to the idea.<br /> &mdash;Anon<br /> <br /> A Freudian slip is when you say one thing but mean your mother.<br /> -Anon

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Thank you so much! I really enjoy haiku, it's a passion, so it's really cool when someone else enjoys them! C:

 

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Grasshopper007 GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 4:50 pm
Grasshopper007 GOLD, Hamilton, Other
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I thought that your haiku was better than some of the ones that got into the magazine! Keep up the good work!
Kay4theRoses said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 1:04 pm
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;all&#039;s fair in love and war.&quot; And &quot;Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn&#039;t jiggle when he laughs.&quot;-A Chinese philosopher. =)

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well, you did a very good job
Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 4:26 pm
Amanda_Reckonwith SILVER, Kenosha, Wisconsin
5 articles 10 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Women and cats will do as they please, and men and dogs should relax and get used to the idea.<br /> &mdash;Anon<br /> <br /> A Freudian slip is when you say one thing but mean your mother.<br /> -Anon

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Thank you for your input!

The seasons are all cyclical; you can't have one without the other, so I wanted to keep all my seasons together to express that more.

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Kay4theRoses said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 12:56 pm
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;all&#039;s fair in love and war.&quot; And &quot;Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn&#039;t jiggle when he laughs.&quot;-A Chinese philosopher. =)

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i liked how you wrote about the year and not limit it to one season like alot of haikus