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Sting MAG
March 8, 2009
You play the game well
sly,
slick,
slithering into the
souls of helpless young girls
just to
sting them with your poison
and leave them aching
sick.
sick venom spreading,
infiltrating red blood,
to pour out in clear form
from her eyes uncontrollably
leave her there forgotten to
sneak up on your
next vulnerable victim
with your beautiful yet
deceiving green eyes
that hide all your dangers
© Jasmine R., Bourbon, MI
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 10:11 pm
wow. this is really good. it sets things into a real perspective that im sure many girls can relate. i also kno someone like this. luv it!
Jade-McKaye SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 9:19 pm
this is soo good!
ChasingWildFlowers BRONZE said...
on Nov. 22 2009 at 12:46 pm
That was amazing. Very relatable. Keep writing. (:
lexikeys247 SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 8:45 pm
hey! thank you so much for the compliments! ill be sure to check your work out also!
The flow of this piece is so well-paced! Really good job. It reminds me a lot of my short story that was published in Teen Ink, "Green-Grey." Check it out and you'll get the same vibe, I think. I also really like the last bit, "...deceiving green eyes/that hide all your dangers." So beautiful!
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2009 at 2:26 am
loved it
fukuhara said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 4:30 am
nice alliteration, i like the flow
