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A Captured Orbit MAG

October 21, 2016
By xSakhix SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
xSakhix SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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The cream in her coffee
A tiny universe
Small galaxies merging with a darker force
A black hole swirling into a single point
The spoon brisked against the mug
Round and round
Captured into orbits
Until the white disperses
The silence dwindles
A curtain introduces
A swarm of clouds hover
Light peers into the crevices
Rays beam upon the hidden stars
Thousands of spotlights
Hurry to the grace of a humbled silhouette
The movement offers
A mumbled hum soaking into a blind sight
The quiet shifts into the limelight
Her branches gently slide over a page
Her coffee
drips
off
center stage
A black hole appears
As streams of coffee
Meet the mug’s dirt ground
Again she continues
Swaying back and forth
An enchanted scene
Glistening before Noise left
The illumination embraces
Coffee sheds
Pages unfold
Universes collide
Recollections
Bodies
Complete
Tranquility



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Manisha said...
on Nov. 14 2016 at 7:05 pm
Amazing! You have a true gift in poetry. Quite profound. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more...

Parinda said...
on Nov. 13 2016 at 12:43 pm
Beautiful and deep!
Keep them coming:)

PyParekh said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 11:32 pm
Nice work. I am impressed.

Shef said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 11:31 pm
Love the symbolism. Very nice!

Soor said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 11:00 pm
Great work. I like the allegory.

Sakhi said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:20 pm
Excellent work of a brilliant young girl.
Keep up the good work.

Megz said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:17 pm
Very impressive!