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December 10, 2015
By Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
All the things that were once forgotten scream for help in dreams.<br /> Elias Canetti



I want to write something deep here

Something profound

but nothing comes to mind

only the glint of ur eye

the curl of your hair

the nervous laugh

 

All i can think about is you

Our future

Our plans
Our children

I love you so much

 

I want to write somethig deep here

something profound

Something to make this hardship go soft

I hat ehow it effects you

i hate how its hurting you

 

It is not fair to you

I dragged you in by being with you

One part says to let you go

The other, selfish side

Says Stay forever, be with me

 

I want to write something deep here

Something profound

BUt all i can think of is,

You dont have to be strong for me

You dont have to fake your way through

Im here too, you have a shoulder to cry on

I know it hurts us both so bad

 

I want to write someting deep here

Something profound

But this is who I am

 

I am not Profound


The author's comments:

right now my boyfriend and i are not able to talk and im not in school. i feel like he is drifting away when we do talk. im afraid and just feel so guilty for putting him thru this. its not his mess. im so torn, i dont know if i should let him gp and let him heal, or hold on for my life. hes who i want to take my last breath with...


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on Dec. 16 2015 at 11:19 pm
Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
All the things that were once forgotten scream for help in dreams.<br /> Elias Canetti

thanksssssss! :)

on Dec. 16 2015 at 11:15 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Think you nailed it with the refrain of I want to write something deep, refrains are always amazing when you have a twist at the end, this was very enjoyable and had a smooth flow through each line. Good job.