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October 14, 2015
By beyondthesky PLATINUM, Santa Monica, California
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beyondthesky PLATINUM, Santa Monica, California
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Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s nicer to think dear, pretty thoughts and keep them in one&#039;s heart, like treasures. I don&#039;t like to have them laughed at or wondered over.<br /> -L.M. Montgomery (Anne of Green Gables)

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Empty boys and empty girls
hallow
shallow
bodies everywhere walk within herds
Please little boy, please little girl
take my cup of heart and fill your own
I know you are sealed tight but now you can open up
I'll help you
I'll
no
wait
please
don't pour it out that's mine
I watch through glass eyes as all I know
shattered
splattered
gets soaked up by the dust and dirt
stepped on

laughter

someone help
I'm drying up
only my eyes retain
leak
what's lost and


where did everybody go?


I'm sorry little boy
little girl
I'm
Never mind please go away
I know I'm just your emptied prey

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

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just an emotion outburst

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beyondthesky PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2015 at 11:23 pm
beyondthesky PLATINUM, Santa Monica, California
34 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s nicer to think dear, pretty thoughts and keep them in one&#039;s heart, like treasures. I don&#039;t like to have them laughed at or wondered over.<br /> -L.M. Montgomery (Anne of Green Gables)

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Thank you @stephg3221 :)) and I hope you keep posting pieces...I love your descriptions
stephg3221 SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2015 at 11:01 pm
stephg3221 SILVER, Wyckoff, New Jersey
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absolutely lovely!
beyondthesky PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2015 at 6:58 pm
beyondthesky PLATINUM, Santa Monica, California
34 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s nicer to think dear, pretty thoughts and keep them in one&#039;s heart, like treasures. I don&#039;t like to have them laughed at or wondered over.<br /> -L.M. Montgomery (Anne of Green Gables)

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Thank you:'))it means so much to me that you like it
feathertail said...
on Oct. 26 2015 at 12:17 pm
feathertail, London, Pennsylvania
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&quot;All around me there are people telling me who I should be. I hate to disappoint you but these are the colours that I see. If there&#039;s just as many colours, as there are human beings, maybe I&#039;m just colour-blind and missing out on everything!&quot; -Nano

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0_0 this is mind-blowing. Seriously it's that good!! Especially since you've only been here for such a short time
anothergreektragedy PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2015 at 2:25 pm
anothergreektragedy PLATINUM, Pembroke, Massachusetts
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Just laugh

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Haha I'm glad i could make you smile!
beyondthesky PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2015 at 8:16 pm
beyondthesky PLATINUM, Santa Monica, California
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Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s nicer to think dear, pretty thoughts and keep them in one&#039;s heart, like treasures. I don&#039;t like to have them laughed at or wondered over.<br /> -L.M. Montgomery (Anne of Green Gables)

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thank you!!! this made me smile..I'm still sitting in front of my computer with this stupid grin on my face
anothergreektragedy PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2015 at 5:46 pm
anothergreektragedy PLATINUM, Pembroke, Massachusetts
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Just laugh

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Wow this is... wow. I'm speechless, which is VERY rare.