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The girl with the smile
April 15, 2015
The girl with the smile
has much to hide.
She is a girl with the eyes
that glow with lies.
She is a girl with no hope
going on without pride.
The girl with the smile
cried before she died.
© Katya K.
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SugarLover127 SILVER said...
on May. 14 2015 at 3:52 pm
This is beautiful, I absolutely beautiful!
I like the feeling here, but I think you could have gone into even more detail with it. What I like the most right now, though, is the brevity and the last lines. You have a hard-hitting poem here with a good message, so don't worry too much about it. Good job!
EvalynnHeather GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2015 at 7:54 pm
That was really good, short and simple. Please check out my poetry if you can, anybody!
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 18 2015 at 8:06 pm
I really liked it. It held much emotion and it touched something that is so very true.
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2015 at 12:14 pm
Well, I'm not one for telling length or style because we all have our own lol this was good XD short, straight, and to the point lol like muchie :)
LotusChild PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2015 at 10:00 am
Well done, perhaps some more imagery would be nice, but otherwise I liked it.
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