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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Oct. 31 2011 at 10:34 am
Lizered13 BRONZE, Beloit, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isnt measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away" Unknown

I just want you to know I really liked that poem. It was sad at the same time it was something i couldnt stop reading untill i got to the end. Nice Job!

on Oct. 30 2011 at 12:32 pm
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

One word AMAZING! 

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on Oct. 29 2011 at 4:48 pm
margot13, Skokie, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a tale told by an idiot- full of noise and furry, in the end signifying nothing." Macbeth by William Shakespeare

This poem is beautiful. I swear I started tearing up.

on Oct. 28 2011 at 7:29 am
CreativelyUnique SILVER, Jackson, Michigan
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This poem is really powerful, I can really feel the strong emotion. You did a great job, keep up the good work

on Oct. 27 2011 at 5:01 pm
Lady-Milano BRONZE, Richardsbay, Other
1 article 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When ever someone says life is so hard I'm tempted to ask,compared to what?"

i was one of the people who always complained,but from today onwards im thankfull i still have a mother. great poem

on Oct. 27 2011 at 1:03 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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it is very deep and very good i can feel the emotion with the words  i am sorry for what you went through

 


on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:31 pm
NiklausMikaelson1864 SILVER, Southwest Harbor, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Please note that I am saying this as I twirl my metaphorical mustache." ~Talon McCallister

Very deep. I love it.

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on Oct. 25 2011 at 12:38 pm
blwblw1 SILVER, Lancaster County, Pennsylvania
8 articles 1 photo 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reading takes you into a world far beyond your eyes can see.<br /> and<br /> L&#039;amor Che More il Sole e L&#039;altre Stelle

i never knew there was such a great writter so close to me........great job:)

on Oct. 24 2011 at 10:53 am
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing&#039;s Impossible, The world is your dream.<br /> In your eyes, the sky&#039;s a different blue.

This is a great piece of work. (: If anyone could read some of my work and give me some feedback i'd really appriciate it, im new to this (:

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on Oct. 22 2011 at 10:51 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Great poem, beautiful really. Maybe you could check out my poem sometime?

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on Oct. 17 2011 at 4:22 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I asked Jesus &#039;How much do you love me?&#039; He answered &#039;This much.&#039; And He streched out His arms and died.&quot;

This is amazing. I absolutely loved it!

on Oct. 9 2011 at 8:31 pm
novella_vialli SILVER, OakBrook, Illinois
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I really liked your poem!

on Oct. 9 2011 at 4:16 pm
Rocinante SILVER, Wexford, Pennsylvania
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Oh this is so touching and heart-wrenching...I love it! It's sad and sweet and pure and lovely...Amazing!

on Oct. 9 2011 at 3:29 pm
Artemis--Sherwood GOLD, Hemet, California
16 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all stories in the end.&quot;

I love this poem because it has this amazing raw emotion and you can picture what you're trying to tell us quite well. Keep it up. :)

on Oct. 9 2011 at 2:51 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
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Spectacular poem. And I would appreciate it if you could check out some of my work, like "True Colors".

on Oct. 9 2011 at 2:46 pm
BloodyMarreh SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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you are simply and greatly amazing, i am sorry for your loss. this really was a touching poem. very heatfelt writing i must add. please stay strong <3

on Oct. 9 2011 at 2:10 pm
DoloresDarling, Cambridge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Sarah Michelle Gellar- [on the importance of reading] I love books. I\&#039;m constantly afraid we\&#039;re moving into this digital era where books are going to go away, and to me books are the basis to everything in life. Reading is how we function.

I know you already have many comments over your amazing poem here ^ <3

I love this <3 It's simply amazing..and I love it.  I'm sorry about your loss, but it's good that your writing about it. 


on Oct. 9 2011 at 11:24 am
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Scars are souvenirs you never lose&quot; - Goo Goo Dolls

and still at sixteen...

i really like that - how you say that. it gives character to this amazing peice of work that's so mysterious, yet so understandable. 


on Oct. 9 2011 at 8:42 am
KPetty13 BRONZE, Saint Cloud, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you&#039;re lucky enought to be different, never change.&quot; ~ Taylor Swift

Great Poem, and I am sorry for your loss. Stay strong <3

on Oct. 9 2011 at 1:08 am
Caban37104 BRONZE, Vineland, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh at me because I&#039;m different, yet I laugh at you because you&#039;re all the same.

Great Work.! =]

 

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