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One more day

November 6, 2014
By Carson17 SILVER, San Jose, California
Carson17 SILVER, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Yes: I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world."


One more day in hell
Another coin gets thrown in a well
Many doors close in your life
Others just grab the knife
I tend to go for the light
But then you’re lost in a fight
I feel the walls closing in
Please god forgive my sins
People make mistakes as do i
We all laugh we all cry
We all smile we all die
But please don’t close the door
Just cause I mourn a little more
Release the birds from their cage
And smell the burning sage
One day we’ll be free
And believe in what we see
But for now as it goes
I’m just another coin thrown in a well
It’s just another day in hell


The author's comments:

This is how i feel life i would love to recieve comments on what to improve on and what you think of my work


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Dinoshaw PLATINUM, Copperas Cove, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage."
~ Lao Tzu

I adore this poem