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Unto a beating heart...

October 27, 2014
By ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

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A sonnet unsung
A work undone
To find the words to speak par none
To see a sunrise & fine not a line to write,
To see crystal snow & not draw tears
To see your face & not see radiant light
Such a feat cannot be done
For when I see you a sonnet demands to be sung
A poem will dance from the tip of my tongue,
& to see your face is inspiration enough,
To write a line for a sunrise tenfold
& a sunset ten more
A muse unspoken
A story not noted
To find you a song
A symbol
A token…

To find a favor to grant you to say
“For years to come together we’ll stay”
& so a beating heart sighs to love…

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

The author's comments:

This poem is dedicated to a woman whom I have deeply entrusted my heart & soul unto, she is my rising sun & setting moon, & forever she shall remain my muse, is she ever finds this poem I’d like to let you know, “My heart beats for you” ….Rachel

~Ansem_unlimited

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BeautyWhispers PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 8:05 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

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Yes I see what you meant about the kinda different writing, but I absolutely love it! Keep it up!
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 19 2014 at 12:31 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

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thank's, it's good to know that I didn't butcher the ryhme scheme!
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 1:44 pm
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE, New Castle, Indiana
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This is a very uniquely written love poem. Usually love poems are too sappy for me, but this one isn't anything like that, and I really enjoyed it. I also am kind of iffy about rhyming poems, but this is an exception. "For when I see you a sonnet demands to be sung" - this line stuck out to me. Very simple and very unique. In all, I don't think there's really anything here to be improved... Good job!