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Unto a beating heart...
October 27, 2014
A sonnet unsung
A work undone
To find the words to speak par none
To see a sunrise & fine not a line to write,
To see crystal snow & not draw tears
To see your face & not see radiant light
Such a feat cannot be done
For when I see you a sonnet demands to be sung
A poem will dance from the tip of my tongue,
& to see your face is inspiration enough,
To write a line for a sunrise tenfold
& a sunset ten more
A muse unspoken
A story not noted
To find you a song
A symbol
A token…
To find a favor to grant you to say
“For years to come together we’ll stay”
& so a beating heart sighs to love…
© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA
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This article has 3 comments.
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 8:05 pm
Yes I see what you meant about the kinda different writing, but I absolutely love it! Keep it up!
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 19 2014 at 12:31 pm
thank's, it's good to know that I didn't butcher the ryhme scheme!
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 1:44 pm
This is a very uniquely written love poem. Usually love poems are too sappy for me, but this one isn't anything like that, and I really enjoyed it. I also am kind of iffy about rhyming poems, but this is an exception. "For when I see you a sonnet demands to be sung" - this line stuck out to me. Very simple and very unique. In all, I don't think there's really anything here to be improved... Good job!
This poem is dedicated to a woman whom I have deeply entrusted my heart & soul unto, she is my rising sun & setting moon, & forever she shall remain my muse, is she ever finds this poem I’d like to let you know, “My heart beats for you” ….Rachel
~Ansem_unlimited