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A World Alone

October 3, 2014
By daisy11 GOLD, New City, New York
daisy11 GOLD, New City, New York
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alone at night,

a quiet world.

 

surrounded by accompanying thoughts,

separated from society.

 

a time to dream,

a time to imagine.

 

seclusion takes over,

serenriy kicks in.

 

a quiet world,

alone at night. 



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on Oct. 8 2014 at 11:27 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is beautiful! Just incredibly, beautiful and wonderful. There's so much emotion in it; and even though it may be short, it's still poweful. This is ust perfect. It perfectly describes my thoughts, so I can connect to it a lot. :) You really have a lot of talent and greatness in you. You're wonderful and talented writer. Never forget that, because you do and you are. Thank you so much, for sharing this. :) I love it. :)

on Oct. 8 2014 at 2:24 am
violawritermady BRONZE, Lehi, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The true artist does not create art as an end to himself. He creates it for others; humanity is the goal." -Bronislaw Huberman

I love the way you ended and began with the same thought, it adds another layer of meaning. Well done! I would love to hear your thoughts on my latest poem. :) 

on Oct. 7 2014 at 7:15 pm
authoress17 SILVER, Evans City, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If there is no such thing as magic...then what is writing?."-authoress17 (me)

Amazing! I felt the emotions as soon as I started reading. Love this poem.

on Oct. 6 2014 at 6:30 pm
Niyaroo PLATINUM, Colonial Beach, Virginia
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I like this. It makes you think