Pure anger | Teen Ink

Pure anger

August 9, 2014
By PoeDarko SILVER, Sandy, Oregon
PoeDarko SILVER, Sandy, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 0 comments

I've been floating, suspended in space. Dying slowly, I watch as each new face goes on by until it disappears. Am I coming or going? I can barely decide. I'm the dark mater that surrounds mars, I've been sitting and clicking the chamber to my cannon for too long. I took aim and started shooting the stars from their holding places, one by one. Now they're falling and burning up in the atmosphere. No longer comprehensive, the stars have stopped running, slowly giving up. As their hearts slowly bleed out, my mind slowly rots away. The sharp pain in my head that I can no longer endure anymore is making me want to snap, and one day just like that, I'll have shot every star in the back. And with my hands I'll have bludgeoned every demon, I'll beat them until I can feel their skulls crack beneath my fists of darkness. I'll bring new meaning to the word "slaughter". Get ready for poetic destruction, my words will cut your from ear to ear. Causing a painful, uneasy, unwanted sick and twisted smile.because my tales come from under the bed of the dead.


The author's comments:
This comes from within. True feelings and thought of pure anger.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Aug. 20 2014 at 9:53 pm
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
7 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writers aren't exactly one person, they're a whole bunch of people trying to be one person"

Hey this was nice...I like it. Your vocabulary is big and that's something lots of people lack in their poetry. I mean...some peeps be like: "I was mad. And angry. And sad. The end." But, no you actually but true emotion and depth into your poem. What i like about it too is that the flow wasn't all that great, but i also like that because almost everybody is all up in arms about the "flow" but sometimes things just shouldn't flow. Like a poem full of angust :) That's just my destorted opinion. Very good job.

on Aug. 20 2014 at 3:46 pm
clamorings BRONZE, Warsaw, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is an echo, asking the shadows to dance." -Carl Sundburg

Wow. You have a very very good sense of imagery... I could picture this as well as "feel" it.