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My Worst Enemy

June 13, 2014
By noam avraham BRONZE, Brookline, Massachusetts
noam avraham BRONZE, Brookline, Massachusetts
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You are my worst enemy,
You think you know what you saw
You act like I committed a felony
In fact, what you said to me has a very big flaw
I wrote this poem first in a notepad
About you being the worst enemy I’ve ever had


You try to get me in trouble
You try to make me seem bad
Leave my personal bubble
Because you are the worst enemy I’ve ever had

You talk to me like I am a child
As if I have done something wrong
You act as if I am wild
When you were wrong all along
Your anger and me do not add
Because you turned into the worst enemy I’ve ever had

Sorry If I was trying to have some fun
And I am sorry that I am young
But I am more sorry that you are a very big bum
I am not sorry that I made you mad
And you’ve become the worst enemy I’ve ever had


The author's comments:
Mad at my friend's parents

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JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2014 at 6:30 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

It was alright - some parts felt a little awkward and uneven with the so many sylables in "you are the worse enemy I've ever had". I can see where you're going with this, and in ways I can relate (some parents can be so ignorant and jerky), but I feel like it could be better. Hope this helps :)

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2014 at 6:12 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing is impossible; the word itself says &#039;I&#039;m possible&#039;!&quot; -Audrey Hepburn

Very powerful poem, well done!