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May 21, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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The legacy you leave is the one you live

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Travelling with the breeze,
I walk along a coast.
All I wanna know is-
Where He really goes!
Some print-less footprints,
Which I try to follow
Vanish completely,
Even as I see them grow.

Is all of this just something in my mind
that I envisage to build my oasis?
Maybe this is just a hope that roars;
And maybe it’s only me who goes,
In search of Him even if I know
He’s not here; He’s not here anymore…

© Ashley B., Potomac, MD

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I never concluded my opinion about Him. Just that, I wish He'd be here!
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CavemanWig BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2014 at 9:56 pm
CavemanWig BRONZE, Grand Island, Nebraska
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mama always said life was like a box of chocolates you never know what your going to get -Forest Gump

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I like this poem because it changes some feeling so suddenly keep on working with your stuff its awesome!
SilverLiner said...
on Nov. 3 2014 at 9:43 am
SilverLiner, Accra, Other
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&quot;uhhhhhhhhh...&quot;

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there's something about this poem i like. i don't know what it is yet, but there's something...  
PatientSoul BRONZE said...
on Aug. 30 2014 at 1:16 am
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I liked this. Good job. :D
Wontgiveup17 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2014 at 9:50 am
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I love how you can feel the emotion in the poem! It kinda threw me off with the rhyme change but other than that overall I think it was wonderfuly written, keep up the good work!!