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Opening

April 25, 2014
By Timesha BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
Timesha BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"only one who attempts the absurd can achieve the impossible " - unknown


Miscommunication of a situation.
Heart breaking mental devastation ,
where rules aren’t rules but guidelines of what not to do
and what you shouldn’t do for you.
For her, it wasn’t ever about her until she claimed her greatness and stepped upon her throne and realized that she could hold her own.
but here it comes listen ,
Torn confused frequently used
The little girls heart cried out except she didn’t know why
false promises seemed to come in a pattern
never failing to re-occur
and in the end there was just her
He told her that it was just because
but she accepted it because what no one knew was she was already torn
confused , frequently used and that was the excuse


The author's comments:
something i am using as an intro for something important to me ,

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Timesha BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2014 at 1:52 am
Timesha BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"only one who attempts the absurd can achieve the impossible " - unknown

exactly , thank you so much . 

on Aug. 7 2014 at 9:07 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Sadly, people have started thinking that that people are to be used and things are to be loved ... when really it is the opposite. People were made to be loved and things to be used. Your poem is beautiful, full of emotion, and full of you. Thank you for sharing this.