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You can't write a poem about the Vietnam war

April 22, 2014
By alycia_yang BRONZE, New Brighton, MN, Minnesota
alycia_yang BRONZE, New Brighton, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
No matter what happens you will get through it sooner or later. Nothing is permanent.


Everyone is running.
I look around and everyone you know is dead.
I can feel my heart beating faster than a race car.
I hear BANG! BANG! close by me, so I run faster
A Vietnam soldier shoots at me barely missing the
side of my head.
I felt as if I was going to die right there and then.
I’m running and running to find safety.
I run faster as if I was the
cheetah’s prey.
I stop behind a hut to catch my breath.
The trees sway a if it was a trying to comfort me
I can smell the dead bodies all around me.
As I am catching my breath a bullet went straight to my head.
Everything went black. I woke up thinking that I’m dead
Lucky I’m not and I’m alive.
I can’t remember everything about my past.
It hurts to think about it, but what happen in the Vietnam war was a vivid memory.



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on May. 22 2014 at 3:22 pm
alycia_yang BRONZE, New Brighton, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
No matter what happens you will get through it sooner or later. Nothing is permanent.

Aww thank you :) 

on May. 21 2014 at 10:45 am
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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awesome!! love all your poems! keep up the good work!!