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The Days of Darkness

April 11, 2014
By DodieM BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
DodieM BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"I will never leave you nor forsake you." -Jesus


The days seem to be getting darker
Everywhere I go another color turns to grey
What’s wrong with me?
How has my world come to sadness?
My mind is vibrant with thoughts and ideas
But somehow I can remember none of them
What is blocking the path to my happiness?
Why am I crying?
I am not happy, but I am not sad
The world around me is turning black and white
I see familiar faces that I can not place
My mind is jumbled into a mess of confusion
I know that I have lost something but nothing I have is missing
Something important is gone that I could never replace
My mind won’t admit it, but my heart knows it
The sadness that my heart aches of
The sadness that makes my mind scramble
Is the sadness of losing you.


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was feeling confused over the person that I liked. These are things that one might feel when they are heart broken.

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on Apr. 28 2014 at 2:12 pm
Over my years of working in the tv industry i have nevere seen such a good poem. As Michelle would put it" Thats totaly cool Dude!"

JustJoshing said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 2:10 pm
Yo thats a good poem . Man it aint no wickity wack here. I loved the part about the days and the other part of that darkness home skilet.