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Cobain

March 28, 2014
By Anonymous

The water was on fire
The air was cold.
Day was slowly setting on the river bank.
Where he sat short-sleeved shivering in the onset of spring.

The lake was an inferno.
In places, the water was so murky deep it looked like black night.
As if it was to swallow him whole.

He lay in the soft dewy grass starry with the reflection of the horizon.
Which with every second was darkening and disappearing.
It was darling in the way a day can decay so easily.

Spots burst across his vision.
Yet he continued to stare into the very thing that controls the cycles of our lives and
blinds us to the day we die.

Every time he breathed in his cigarette smoke, his body committed suicide.
The trees wailed.The wind cut through him like sharp words.
The embers just burned.

This boy was lost in the rough ending of winter and the delicate start of spring.
He swallowed the sun and blew out its ashes.
He had a fire inside of him that water couldn't quench.

He needs oxygen to live.
His soul to die.
He smokes to cry.
Life is just the time in which he dies.
And we all die.
Whether it be our bodies
or just our minds


The author's comments:
I wrote this one afternoon sitting in my backyard. It was a cool windy day and I was watching the sunset over the lake. The first thing that popped in my head was, the water is on fire. It continued to repeat and repeat in my head until I wrote it down and out came this poem. I was also listening to Nirvana while writing this. So hence the title is Cobain.

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Nadaa SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2014 at 3:59 pm
Nadaa SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Sorry for such a late reply but thank you so much! I really appreciate it

on Mar. 31 2014 at 10:31 pm
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Writers aren't exactly one person, they're a whole bunch of people trying to be one person"

This was an intereasting poem. I loved all of the discriptive details. My favorite part was where you wrote: "He swallowed the sun and blew out the ashes" That was just really neat. And, I love the title too. I mean, because I like Nirvana :D  So, this poem was really, really, good! :D Keep up the good work! :) -Jofie