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Mother's beauty

March 23, 2014
By Sandip SILVER, New Delhi, Other
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oh! thee beauty
can't be resist
your one atom has so much
that a poet can make thousands
I wish i could sojourn here forever
not in the form of my spectre
every part of yours
teaches us,
the way of life
your beauty is highly culminated
MOTHER!

© Lucy A., Strafford, NH

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CookieMonster24 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2014 at 6:11 am
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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I love the idea of the poem, and how it says "every part of yours teaches us the way of life". However, overall, I find this poem a little...off. I can't quite put my finger on it. I liked the poem, but as I approached to the end, I hated it, that you wrote 'mother' in caps. Just my opinion. You obviously have the potential to do better.