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Winter MAG

November 12, 2008
By Aniko Gomory BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
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White
Gray
Black
Sprinkles of snow
One week later
Cold

Breath unfurls from lips that whispered
Excitement flushes through already
Reddened cheeks
The chill inhaled returns as smoke

Sleet decorates town into a fantasyland
Where angels are made
And children turn into eskimos
Until the call of hot chocolate is too tempting to resist

Sweater upon sweater
Upon layer upon layer
New boots are quickly worn
And the cool hurries along

© Kristen S., Northville, MI

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Free- GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 7:33 pm
Free- GOLD, Blllll, Kentucky
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&quot;I believe in you and I believe in me, and I believe that we are not meaningless.&quot;<br /> &quot;What a waste of a perfectly good wrist.&quot;

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stunning....keep writing!
gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 5:17 pm
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You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

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good poem i really hat winter 
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:07 pm
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I like it alot! :) five stars all the way! please check out my work, i would love to hear ur opinion! THANKS FOR POSTING!
Marlyre PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:20 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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&quot;when you cry, do you waste your tears?&quot; Madonna

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definitely "cool" images in the piece and alongside it. read some of mine?
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:11 pm
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Nice. i like it. Keep writing.

And please check out my work. Ratings are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks!

Bethani GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 8:56 pm
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I don't get what your talking about with all the different groups. What are you trying to say?
DestinyMartinez PLATINUM said...
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Wow, this is really good. I love the detail in this. You’re a great writer. You should really check out some of my writing I think you will like it. Our writing is similar in a way. Please comment and rate too. Thank you.
chelle-bear said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 11:52 am
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i don't like winter, but i love this poem. it captures winter perfectly. =] and i love the mug in the picture
Sanah BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 11:05 pm
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i adore winter, as well as hot chocolate! ahah, your very talented Aniko. i love it (:
TheUnknownGuest GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 3:52 am
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
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I can&#039;t remember it clearly, but it went something like this:<br /> <br /> &quot;The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present.&quot;

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That's very interesting.