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I found him<3

February 21, 2014
By nicloe BRONZE, Paragould, Arkansas
nicloe BRONZE, Paragould, Arkansas
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I found him! I found him! The love of my life I found him! He makes me smile and laugh and my world go round. He is my Redneck Remo. I love him so much he is so special to me i would die with out him. I meet him through my sister and now I have fell head over heals for him!


The author's comments:
I was Inspired to wirght this because of my Boyfriend. I love him very much

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on Mar. 2 2014 at 11:47 pm
wtaylore BRONZE, Flemingsburg, Kentucky
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This isn't exactly a poem, love. Also, please learn proper grammar if you plan to pursue poetry. Best of luck to you though, darling.

on Mar. 2 2014 at 5:10 pm
Plumwriter BRONZE, Clinton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Live simply, love generously, care deeply, speak kindly and leave the rest to God&quot;

You're just a teenager. I hate to break it to you girly, but I don't think you're in love. Maybe this poem would be a little better if you put more emotion into it. More adjectives or comparisons rather than just a hundred exclaimation points. Every teenage girl feels this in a relationship. Any one teenage girl could have written this. It needs more to make it different and good